tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8664740279606457689.post8638153299784637672..comments2024-01-23T10:12:01.320-08:00Comments on Pens, Thespians, and Words: From the holodiary of Aran Liander: Jedi ApprenticeShena Tokalahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17657993823328581910noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8664740279606457689.post-70285043719580114992012-03-18T12:29:32.263-07:002012-03-18T12:29:32.263-07:00Thank you very much, Aayla :)Thank you very much, Aayla :)Shena Tokalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17657993823328581910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8664740279606457689.post-57315738496420004652012-03-18T11:17:45.304-07:002012-03-18T11:17:45.304-07:00keep on going. ur doing awesome. :)keep on going. ur doing awesome. :)Danica Moonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18151569951660388944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8664740279606457689.post-6111160025968246692012-03-18T05:30:11.234-07:002012-03-18T05:30:11.234-07:00Thank you very much, glad you liked this chapter. ...Thank you very much, glad you liked this chapter. Yeah, I couldn't quite figure out a way to have Vader not kill him so I just had him get knocked out(I think it had to do with the fact that he called him Anakin and so he just left rather quickly.) And yes, I know there are probably some mistake and it would be probably better if I edited it. And I forgot to indent when I posted(facepalm). Oh and the story is about to get very original and interesting :) Thanks again :)Shena Tokalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17657993823328581910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8664740279606457689.post-81557865871774418292012-03-17T21:08:22.289-07:002012-03-17T21:08:22.289-07:00Wow... I got so absorbed in it that I forgot the t...Wow... I got so absorbed in it that I forgot the time @__@ This is your best chapeter yet. I'm glad he was knighted... but it's kinda starnge Vader didn't kill him. I hope Aran gets to understand. I liked the girl. Your description was amazing... and this could really get published. For constructive critism, I found some typos and the paragraphs could be adjusted a little to run smoother... there are some parts needing some revised ideas, but I couldn't do better :) But otherwise, awesome. Oh, by the way, Holo-journal would probably be better, but then since it's already Holodiary (I always read it as Holidary) you might wanna make it holo-diary :DSolace Utarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04164268805972950866noreply@blogger.com